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If I die Young
North Italy x Dead!Reader


White clothing laid softly on the red flowers,
as the thornless roses brushed lightly on the soft (skintone) legs.
(h/c) hair gracefully danced with the wind.
Everything was quiet and peaceful,
And you began to hum your favorite song.

"If I die young, bury me in satin
Lay me down on a bed of roses
Sink me in the river at dawn
Send me away with the words of a love song...."





Your mother gazed out the window,to the fields.
"Lord make me a rainbow, I'll shine down on my mother"
The fields is were you would always be,were you would always rest and play.
"She'll know I'm safe with you when she stands under my colors"
She pulled a rose from the vase,they were always your favorite flowers.
It reminded her of you,(e/c) eyes full of innocence and happiness.
She's sure that your now safe in heaven,standing beside God.
She never knew why her little sweet child had to be taken,way from her.
"Oh, and life ain't always what you think it ought to be, no Ain't even gray, but she buries her baby"



Feliciano sat near your cold dead body,lying on a bed of roses.
"The sharp knife of a short life"
You were stabbed on the heart,murdered.
"Well, I've had just enough time"
He hoped,that you were happy.That you didn't have any regrets.
"And I'll be wearing white when I come into your kingdom
I'm as green as the ring on my little cold finger"

He looked at your once full of life,now dead and cold.
He reached for your hand,and looked at the little green engagement ring that he gave you on a very special night.He held your hand,tears streamed down his face.
"I've never known the loving of a man
But it sure felt nice when he was holding my hand"

He quietly sobbed,the once cheerful man was filled with sadness

"There's a boy here in town, says he'll love me forever"
He sobbed, "(name),we promised.Forever right?Forever?" he whispered between his sobs,
"Forever...."
"Who would have thought forever could be severed by
The sharp knife of a short life"

He held your hand more tightly,he never thought that the promise both of you had made will be broken.Because of a sharp knife.
"Well, I've had just enough time..."
But still,he was happy.That you loved him and he loved you.

"So put on your best,boys,and I'll wear my pearls
What I never did is done"



"A penny for my thoughts, oh no, I'll sell 'em for a dollar"
You were stabbed,in the heart by a sharp knife.
"They're worth so much more after I'm a goner..."
You could feel your life slipping away,more blood was lost.
Feli tried to whisper comforting things to you.To keep you alive,but it was no use.
"And maybe then you'll hear the words I been singing"
You were at the hospital.Lying in a hospital bed with all your close ones around you.
"Funny, when you're dead how people start listening..."
With all the strength left,you spoke softly.

"If I die young,
Bury me in satin
Lay me down on a bed of roses
Sink me in the river at dawn
Send me away with the words of a love song..."


Time seemed to slow down,
"The ballad of a dove"
You closed your eyes slowly,
"Go with peace and love"
As the awful sound began to start
"Gather up your tears, keep 'em in your pocket"
Feli mouthed some words yet you could no longer hear them
"Save them for a time when you're really gonna need them, oh"
Tears streamed down your mother's face and onto your clean white dress

The sun was rising,making everything golden.
"The sharp knife of a short life"
Yet,it could not brighten up the mood.
"Well, I've had just enough time..."
The priest mouthed some words and everyone began to sing
"So put on your best, boys"
Soon,on the coffin which you slept began to drift away from land
"And I'll wear my pearls...."
Admin Chan: Okay like I was about to have my siesta when this idea like popped out of my mind.And then I kicked my bro out the computer and took over.Yes how much of a good sister I am.
Like okay this reminds me of HetaOni...
Is it updated already?The feels...is just too much...
Why cliffhanger,WHY?!
*sobs on the floor*

Remilia: Don't mind admin chan's feels attack,anyways
A songtalia contest entry for :iconhetaliaaxis-writers: songtalia contest
My third entry
:icondoitsufacepalmplz::iconsaysplz:Why do you write sad things?
:iconremi-reads::iconsaysplz:It may appear to be sad but both my second and third entry shows that you must be content with what you have rather than wishing for more because someday it'll be gone.

Hetalia (c) :iconhimaruyaplz:
You (c) :iconsexyitalyplz:
Song (c) The band Perry
Plot (c) :iconremi-reads:

I don't own the pic
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:iconvodkakun:
VodkaKun Featured By Owner 2 days ago  New Deviant Hobbyist
Shit... It's raining damn well here.
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Lforeverisa Featured By Owner May 5, 2015
Wait!!!! I need to know who fucking murdered me!!!!! I will rise from hell and haunt him forever!!!!!
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:iconremi-reads:
Remi-Reads Featured By Owner May 6, 2015
The question is.....did you really die? DUN DUN DUN
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:iconsk8rchic2000:
Sk8rchic2000 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I want to leave a comment telling you how wonderfully sad this is.

Here you go.
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:iconannikoko:
Annikoko Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014   Artist
If I have the contining nightmares for 3 months like I use to when I was young, It snot my fault ;A;
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:iconbaconpug:
baconpug Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Komari Kamikita (Crying) [V5] 
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:iconkjxyz1234-gmail:
kjxyz1234-gmail Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
Im so srry feli
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:iconpinkietheanimeperson:
PinkieTheAnimePerson Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Doitsu!!! HUG MEH I BE SAD!! ;A;
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:iconremi-reads:
Remi-Reads Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
Take HRE instead :iconholyromeplz:
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:iconpinkietheanimeperson:
PinkieTheAnimePerson Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
o-okay.................*huggles HRE*
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:iconcallamoon14:
callamoon14 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*sobs* beautiful! :iconbravoplz:
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:iconremi-reads:
Remi-Reads Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
Merci~ :la:
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:iconcallamoon14:
callamoon14 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Uh how do you say your welcome in French again?
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:iconremi-reads:
Remi-Reads Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
De Rien
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:iconcallamoon14:
callamoon14 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
oh ok
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:iconkirbylover226:
kirbylover226 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
votre accueil
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:iconcallamoon14:
callamoon14 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh..... I should have known that
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:iconkirbylover226:
kirbylover226 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
all i did was use google translate so i dont even know if its right XD
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:iconcallamoon14:
callamoon14 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Probably not lol
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:iconkirbylover226:
kirbylover226 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD I. REGERT. NOTHING.
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:iconcreampuff-sky:
Creampuff-sky Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Probably mah comment don't really have anything to do with this, but... I've dreamt about me being in hetalia. 3 times. 1 in a haunted house and at the last part, italy hangs on to a wastafel. 2. Me being as italy lil sis. 3. Me, being in a game where all countries are drooling for mai oc... Hehe
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Remi-Reads Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
Admin Chan:Cool dreams you have there :3
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:iconcreampuff-sky:
Creampuff-sky Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :3
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:iconkarkittyxx:
KarkittyXX Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013
CREY CREEEEEEY!!!!!! ;A;
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:iconyuffie-fair:
yuffie-fair Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
And there go my feels :iconcryforeverplz: :iconsoemotionalplz:
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:icondebbydingo:
DebbyDingo Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconamericawhyplz: im crying. .. so bad.... why?!
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:iconremi-reads:
Remi-Reads Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
:icontissuesplz: idk,potatoes don't know~
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:icondebbydingo:
DebbyDingo Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconamericawhyplz: I JUST RE-READ THIS AGAIN
I
AM
CRRYYTHING DO BAAD ;A;
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:iconpika-pikacuteness:
Pika-PikaCuteness Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
:iconsobplz: WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH THAT STUPID BASTARD WHO STABBED ME! I DONT WANT TO LEAVE ITALY! I DONT WANNA LEAVE LIFE! *cries* NO! I WONT ALLOW ME TO DIE! I HOPE THAT BASTARD IS HAPPY..:icondivaprussiaplz: he shall die in the hands of my awesomeness...
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:iconremi-reads:
Remi-Reads Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
Go girl,I'll give ya an awesome lucky keychain for that :3
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:iconpika-pikacuteness:
Pika-PikaCuteness Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
:{0 ohhh...*kills em in the hands of my awesomeness*
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:iconremi-reads:
Remi-Reads Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
That's an awesome kill there gurl 8D
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:iconpika-pikacuteness:
Pika-PikaCuteness Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
X3 danke~ now i shall let my rage out by beating a tree
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:iconhappylittletune1223:
HappyLittleTune1223 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
...................................................

*stalks italy as a ghost, doing ghostly things to tell him I'm there, scaring him by accident* .-.
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:iconremi-reads:
Remi-Reads Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
SHH it's fine italy,It's just an angel :3
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:iconhappylittletune1223:
HappyLittleTune1223 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
Italy: V-ve?
Me: HI ITALY!! :D
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:iconremi-reads:
Remi-Reads Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
Your guardian angel desu~
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:iconhappylittletune1223:
HappyLittleTune1223 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
Me: *tries to hug but goes through him* ;^;
Italy: *trying not to cry from fear*
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:iconremi-reads:
Remi-Reads Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
Choco-tan:Get'a hold of yer self italia!The angel's <name>(I'm sorry I'm to lazy to put your name)!Get'a hold of yer self!*Shakes italia*
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:iconhappylittletune1223:
HappyLittleTune1223 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
Italy: *completely shocked*
Me: *still trying to hug him* .-. 
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:iconremi-reads:
Remi-Reads Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
Admin:Now that's a good boy~ Anyways see ya 'round!
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HailleyPie Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconamericawhyplz::iconamericawhyplz::iconamericawhyplz::iconamericawhyplz: 
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Remi-Reads Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
:icontissueplz:
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Orange-Flamethrower Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
.............. this comment right here describes my feels perfectly after reading this
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:iconhailleypie:
HailleyPie Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I feel you :icontherethereplz: 
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:iconorange-flamethrower:
Orange-Flamethrower Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
thanks TTnTT
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HailleyPie Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconcryforeverplz::iconsoemotionalplz::iconbrohugplz: 
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:iconnightmareviolinist:
NightmareViolinist Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
Oh my god why ;~;
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:iconremi-reads:
Remi-Reads Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
idk I'm sorryyyy kyuuuu ;w;

(sorry for late reply!)
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NightmareViolinist Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
It's okay ;A;
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